Playing with poems


Along the lines of The House That Jack Built, we read The Nut that Atu Planted


The tipa reading ropu came up with our own version

This is the pipi
that sat in the sand.

This is the ika
that ate the pipi
that sat in the sand.

This is the seal
that scared the the ika
that ate the pipi
that sat in the sand.

This is the rubbish
that annoyed the seal
that scared the the ika
that ate the pipi
that sat in the sand.

This is the silly killy
that dropped the rubbish
that annoyed the seal
that scared the the ika
that ate the pipi
that sat in the sand.

This is the life guard
that growled the silly killy
that dropped the rubbish
that annoyed the seal
that scared the the ika
that ate the pipi
that sat in the sand.



And Makaea made this one!

This is the worm
that was wriggling around.

This is bird
that was swooping around
that ate the worm
that was wriggling around.

This is the cat
that scared the bird
that was swooping around
that ate the worm
that was wriggling around.

This is the dog
that chased the cat
that scared the bird
that was swooping around
that ate the worm
that was wriggling around.

This is the horse
that kicked the dog
that chased the cat
that scared the bird
that was swooping around
that ate the worm
that was wriggling around.

This is the dinosaur
that stomped on the horse
that kicked the dog
that chased the cat
that scared the bird
that was swooping around
that ate the worm
that was wriggling around.

This is the dragon
that burnt the dinosaur
that stomped on the horse
that kicked the dog
that chased the cat
that scared the bird
that was swooping around
that ate the worm
that was wriggling around.


Different style but amazing poem from Toby -

Boat launching, waves crashing,

Sea spray in my face  
Fish jumping, reel screaming.
I love the chase.
Oh here he comes!
He's a big one, no longer in the ocean.
Now in my chilly bin the biggest fish of the day
I hope i win.
Toby

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